Dear Kinan,

We have reviewed the amended strategy documents and even though it looks much better then previous versions, we are not fully satisfied with the way it is structured and the way it reads.  Our concerns expressed at our last meeting, regarding structure and wording of the document as well as absence of the expert from the country remain the same.  This latest version does not fully meet the quality standards and we don’t have much time to work with Ani at a distance, trying to re-word and restructure the document.

Please consider hiring additional expert to support us in finalizing the strategic document as agreed during our last meeting.

We highly appreciate your support in this very important assignment. 

Kind regards,

Tamuna

Dear Elza,

Please find attached the amended strategy by Ani. Ani said that the strategy has been edited well and restructured in a much better way this time. Kindly review it and let us know what you think.

Best regards,

Kinan

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